I then made an effort to visit the sites of those who had commented on my work. I came across a lovely photo by 'bluesrose' titled 'One' - of a yellow rose in a black frame. To see it go here.
I immediately wrote the following poem in response:
One day, one love, one moment, one kiss, one rose, a sign of friendship ....one sigh, one hug, one dreamy kip, framed in eloquence.
Note: one of the 'Flickrers' had told 'bluesrose' to watch the framing, hence the reference to that.
I then got some feedback on a poem from 'Serendipity comes across' and so I went to look at her photos and was bowled over by a lovely black and white portrait, slightly blurred showing a woman's raised neck and jaw line. Also need to go to Flick to see it here
This is the poem I wrote, also spontaneously and from the top of my head, in response:
When pain and pleasure collide
There is very little to hide
Showing your vulnerability
Opening up to fragility
When nothing is ever black and white
Shadows give a different light
Reaching up for that tender kiss
Hoping that it is not the last, the one to miss
2 comments:
Reaching up for that tender kiss
Hoping that it is not the last, the one to miss
That's nicely said. I think your personal blog is a great idea.
Thank you, very much :-)
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