An opening to morning light...

An opening to morning light..., originally uploaded by * Ahmad Kavousian *.

Another inspiration ...

Through the trees shines a new horizon
Soft pink skies and spindly trees beckon
Will the promises be as true as they reckon
Or will my love have to be not first, but second?

Marbleized

marbleized, originally uploaded by Rootzz !W(*)(*)W!.

This picture reminded me of the 70s ... childhood, marbles, the next generation ... so I wrote this poem on the spot ...

In these crazy times of high speed technology
You could lose your marbles quite easily
Taking acid isn't a new phenomenon
But the slogans of "don't drug and drive" are a new one
If you can create tones of amazing expression
Then why waste your time with hesitation
Lets live life through our childhood imagination
Get back to the basics, before the surge of the next generation

stars in sky or rain on glass?

I came across this photo "stars in sky or rain on glass?" ... I think its a really cool concept. Got me pondering and lines for a poem just started popping into my head!

It made me think about a poem I'd read in San Francisco (can't think of the author!) about how a raindrop will carry the memories of its journey from being in a mountain cloud, to going down a river to the ocean and back up to the clouds in the mountains. Made me think that even though a water drop may be just a tiny thing it could have come from a massive ocean, which is part of a world that is so tiny compared to all the stars! I suppose the theme of the poem is to challenge perceptions and reality; the moral of the poem is that however small we are its important to make the most of whats around us (which for me is through learning, photography and poetry).

Here is the picture and the poem in response (I decided to challenge myself and make every line have exactly 14 syllables and to all rhyme) ...

stars in sky or rain on glass?, originally uploaded by sam mcconnochie.

Reality … the simple expression of perception …
What you believe helps you perceive an altered reflection.
The mundane can become insane in magnification,
Even a rain drop, in a world of its own creation.

A tiny drop, perhaps born from a majestic ocean,
Twinkles in a flash, as if spellbound by a magician.
No less beautiful than a star in a constellation.
Equally, rightfully, admired with fascination.

We are mere droplets to any star in comparison,
A microscopic speck of the tiniest formation!
Mind-blowing, even for the wildest imagination.
Makes life feel unreal, a world of dust in animation.

A droplet could drown this dust …or …sprinkle motivation
A fine balance between hope, fear, faith and inspiration
So gaze up, peek through, delve in … explore with admiration
Get that thirsty dust sparkling bright … without hesitation!

Lets dance with a gipsy song now... by Ahmad Kavousian

Lets dance with a gipsy song now..., originally uploaded by * Ahmad Kavousian *.

By looking through Mashka Cordwell's favourites in Flickr (she has a great 'artistic eye'), I stumbled upon this B&W portrait by Ahmad Kavousian. Fantastic street / portrait photographer!! A lot of talent to be inspired by. This particular photo was after a series of photos about the Islamic revolution, which he'd taken photos of in 1979. I wrote this in response ...

Play for me ... a memory
Something with sweet melancholy
I shall hear it on the street
Evoke a dance with my two left feet
Revolutions and consequence depart
Defeat shall not pull the strings of my heart

I see it now, in black and white
The struggle, the pain, the fight
Promised heaven, a rebirth
Minds were lost in this hell on earth
So play for me ... a memory
Let the light shine through this ebony

Where there is green ... by Bill Cross

WHERE THERE IS GREEN, originally uploaded by wildcardpoet.

Met wildcardpoet (Bill Cross) on Flickr today. He is a wonderful photographer and poet. Kindly took the time to look through my work. This is his most recent pic which I wrote the following poem to:

Where there is green ... there is hope
There is life, nurturance, a desire to cope
Survival in camouflage
A home, a haven ... best not in a vase

"One" and "Solace"

Tonight I've been making an effort to look through the Flickr photo groups that I've joined, posted some of my favourite pictures into discussion threads (hoping they will invite me / comment) and I have had a lot of success with this one (click on it to be taken directly to Flickr site):



I then made an effort to visit the sites of those who had commented on my work. I came across a lovely photo by 'bluesrose' titled 'One' - of a yellow rose in a black frame. To see it go here.

I immediately wrote the following poem in response:

One day, one love, one moment, one kiss, one rose, a sign of friendship ....one sigh, one hug, one dreamy kip, framed in eloquence.

Note: one of the 'Flickrers' had told 'bluesrose' to watch the framing, hence the reference to that.

I then got some feedback on a poem from 'Serendipity comes across' and so I went to look at her photos and was bowled over by a lovely black and white portrait, slightly blurred showing a woman's raised neck and jaw line. Also need to go to Flick to see it here

This is the poem I wrote, also spontaneously and from the top of my head, in response:

When pain and pleasure collide
There is very little to hide
Showing your vulnerability
Opening up to fragility
When nothing is ever black and white
Shadows give a different light
Reaching up for that tender kiss
Hoping that it is not the last, the one to miss

Poetry and art (II)

More poetry in response to inspiring photography / art ...

The next piece is by Andrew McConnochie (titled 'Depart this Mortal Coil'). I liked the original photo because it raised questions of why the family would decide to put a fence around a gravesite - but then the photo has been layered with images of text, a butterfly and a cross (and possibly other bits still hidden in there). In my poem I was trying to respond to all aspects of the image ...


Cocooned in gentle claustrophobia
Needing security, wanting desire
Seeking freedom within life's toil
Attempting to unravel this mortal coil
Before arriving at a protected resting place
When silence drowns any revered words of grace.
Hush ... why cry, or sigh?
Be free, like a butterfly.
Love is pure, there is nothing to fear
No longer a cross to bear.



You can see the original photo in large (and other work by Andrew) here

Poetry in response to art

Recently I have been responding, with the use of poetry, to photos / pieces of work uploaded by my friends on Flickr and I thought I'd share some of them.

I first responded to Mashka, who, during a period of melancholy, did some self-portraits. In a poetic mood and feeling inspired I wrote haikus in response to three of her pieces. The general rule of thumb with a haiku is that it is 17 syllables shared over three lines (5/7/5).

In response to the first photo I am making a play on words with photography terminology and responding to the lovely way in which she uses focus / depth of field. In the last two photos she has put up the same shot but the second one has artistic alterations. I found differences in her expression due to the effects, despite it being the same shot, so that is what I'm also highlighting in the poems.



Focus on the depth

of the field of your sorrows

exposing ... rawness

What do I see there,

resting on the verge,

melting ...a single tear drop?

Ahh but hidden here,

hinting a glimmer of hope,

just a slight smile?

You can see the original photo on flickr with other comments (#1) here and the original of #2 here and for #3 here